RDG: The other side of the Game

[takishi]

GUESS WHAT'S BACK

RDG The other side of the Game:

One day, a wolf snuck into a group of friendly rabbits. As the others fell asleep, the wolf appeared in natural form. Day by day, one by one, the wolf killed and ate the rabbits. The rabbits not knowing which the wolf was, arranged a meeting. Then- The tribunal decided on the one amongst them that they believed to be the wolf and killed it. If they chose correctly, the rabbits win. If they were wrong... All of the rabbits would be killed and eaten by the wolf. This is the story of such a game.

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Chapter 1: It all began

It was dark. Unlucky had been waiting for hours now. Although compared to the other “players” in the hospital they were, he had it easy. He was in a chair. Waiting for the signal.

He didn’t know what the signal was. Haruhi just told him that he would hear it when it came.

While he was waiting, Unlucky thought of the previous days. Attracting everybody here had been a piece of cake. Organising an RDG Members Reunion” had been enough to convince everybody to come to this country: Canada.

Without Xetkas help for the funding of the operation, none of this would have ever become true. Although the plan was his, the money came from Xetka and the rest was going to rest mainly on Haruhis shoulders. Every one of them had a part to do here. Although for now, his had been the messiest.

Killing Fallenbane had not been an easy thing to do. Not because of the struggle, she had been drugged before like everybody else. But even with an axe, cutting the head had been a pain in the ass. The axe slipped many time on the spinal cord situated at the neck and if she had been awake, it would have been very painful. Not the first time that an axe fails to cleanly cut a head on the first try, an English Queen suffered from fifteen axe strikes before the head was separated from the body. That’s why the guillotine had been invented by Doctor Guillotin and then perfected by Doctor Louis. Two French created one of the most popular death sentence tool.

Mutilating the body had been a gruesome affair, and while doing it, Unlucky had thrown up a few times. It had been horrible and he didn’t want to do it yet again.

The final touch on Fallenbanes’ body was made with a small knife. He had carved a “Fleur de Lys”. A direct hint to his current T-Shirt.

Let’s see if they are able see through the hint, thought Unlucky. He even planned to tell them the signification of the symbol if they didn’t know it.

A scream was to be heard in the cold silence of the hospital. That’s my queue. Haruhi hadn’t lied when she sad that he was going to here it.

He sprinted out of the room, not forgetting to close the light behind him. He knew where the body was and headed out for other there.

“Game Start”



This story takes place exactly at the same time as the previous one, but with a different point of view.

The Wolves one.

Hope you have enjoyed it.

[Crackshot]

Yay you did start a second story, cheers man Im still not sure how xet can afford to fly us all to canada

[Kuro]

Ah, interesting. I was curious about what happened to Ellie.

[Dee]

Yuhu~ Season 2

Curious what happen next

[takishi]

Chapter 2: An artist’s point of view

Unlucky had done a good job to impose himself. But his acting was too rough. He had said that he had done theatre a few years back, but it rough. Suspicions were going to fly early for him. But that was what he wanted.

Freaking suicidal maniac. He wants to tell them the meaning of the clues he himself put up.

He could die for all Haruhi cared. His use was mainly to prepare the plan and to do all of the messy work. The first death was the most important. It needed to put fear in the hearts of the “players”. The rest of the deaths were going to be silent. If people were to disappear mysteriously, fear and anguish will be nurtured in the hearts of the others. And that was very nice in Haruhi’s mind.

It had been easy to fool the other girls into making them care for her. Why’d the heck would she care on a discussion on Twilight. Both of the guys were ugly and their replacements for the parody Vampire’s Suck were way better. The parody was also way better than the original movie, but that wasn’t hard. Girls these days were way less mature than Haruhi.

But she had to focus. Unlucky had been able to give her a nice team to search the corridors. Only Xetka could travel these halls without the risk of losing herself. Even Unlucky could get lost here. Even with his eidetic memory, he could get lost. But, by using very few turns and by marking said turns, it’s quite easy to find yourself around. You just had to remember to do it.

Losing Joker Lyly and Spineless Crackshot had been easier than she thought. She was now alone with Elliecakes. She almost had a death grip on her arm. But soon, Death would have a death grip on Elliecakes. Her death was going to be slow and painful. Unlucky didn’t want a death like that. He preferred painless death.

What a wuss. Behind his tak of him playing airsoft and paintball, he was quite spineless. He couldn’t understand the pleasure you had when you killed somebody slowly. Seeing the life slowly fade away from somebody was a great scene. Xetka was also on Haruhi’s side on how to kill somebody. She wanted to cut Fallenbane’s head last, to make her see and feel all of the cuts that they planed to do on her body.

But no. Unlucky had drugged Fallenbane, and then cut off her head with a clean strike. Haruhi hated guys like that. But then again, there weren’t many guys that had enough guts to kill somebody. So she’ll let that one go. He had been friendly enough to Haruhi have the second kill. And since he wasn’t here to stop her from killing somebody slowly, she was gong to take her time into killing Elliecakes.

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They had stopped by a door. Haruhi weighed Elliecakes down. She was worried like hell. Both Crackshot and Lyly were gone. And she had absolutely no idea to where they were. She felt a strong push on her back. Elliecakes was flying. There were stairs under her, and she saw the floor getting closer. She thought:

“Houston we have a problem!”

The land was hard, but luckily, she had nothing broken. She looked at the door to see who had pushed her down, and she saw that it was Haruhi. And strangely enough she was smiling. Before Elliecakes could stand, Haruhi had closed the door. Elliecakes rushed to the door, wanting to get an explanation to Haruhi’s actions. When she reached the door, it was locked from the outside.

“HARUHI!!!! OPEN THIS DOOR THIS INSTANT!!!!”, yelled Elliecakes.

The only sound she heard back was a gurgling one, and the sound of water. She turned her head, and saw that the room was starting to fill itself with water. And fast.

Elliecakes pounded on the door even louder, hoping that somebody would come and save her from this giant and deadly fish tank. But nobody came. Soon, she was floating in the water and she was going to reach the ceiling. Soon she was going to drown. A horrible death.

Soon came and she was holding her respiration, hoping that that somebody would come. But still nobody came. Her lungs felt as though they were on fire. They were screaming for air. She couldn’t hold anymore and water started to fill her lungs.

2 minutes and 30 seconds. It was the time needed for a drowning person to die. It’s a long death.

A horrible one.

You are conscious that you are dying and that if you breathe the water, you will die, but your body reacts on its own, making you breathe when you don’t want to. Four minutes after drowning, you still have a 60% chance of surviving if somebody does CPR. After eight minutes, there are no chances. Somebody once said in a movie “A sailor told me once that drowning was like going back home”. That same person later said that he lied, and that the sailor had said that it was agony.

Elliecakes, if she had survived could have trued that.

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Xetka waited. She had the worst part. She actually had to wait that somebody finds her. What a lame idea had Unlucky when he made the freaking plan.

One the other hand, the first thing she could do when she gets out of the room was to kill in the way she wanted the first “rabbit” she found. She was going to make sure that it was going to be painful. Even though Unlucky disapproved for unnecessary pain, she was going to make it as painful as possible.

Unlucky is going to be a pain in the ass, she thought. I should talk to Haruhi about disposing about him. That shouldn’t be too hard to do. I just have to wait.

And she waited.

[Dee]

waiting is a bit boring, you know

For Ellie, rest in peace if u cant get urself escape

[takishi]

My style from the first book is broken. I will post the 3rd chapter tonight or tomorrow afternoon, and it might be the last one I post for this story.

I want you readers to write a critique about the chapter 3:

- What you like

- What you don't like

- What you want

If you like the chapter, I'll continue it until the end of the first story. If you don't, this story will be cut short.

[takishi]

Chapter 3: Fail in plan


Unlucky walked next to Lyly. He needed to spread doubt in the hearts of bunnies. By using Elliecakes disappearance, he was going to go and kill Lyly. Making him disappear, pretending to have been attacked and accusing him for the death of Fallenbane.

It was foolproof.

Although killing a friend was kinda hard, he had to do it. He had to use the dispute that had occurred on the forum between Elliecakes and Lyly. It was a rotten trick, but the best one he had at the moment. Unlucky had planed on a swift death.

A broken neck or a fractured skull would be enough.

When Unlucky thought that they were far enough, he put his plan into motion.

But Lyly’s reaction wasn’t the one he had hoped for.

Instead of arguing for a few minutes, the argument lasted a score of seconds. Right after, Lyly attacked Unlucky with a combat knife.

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WHY DOES HE HAVE A BLOODY COMBAT KNIFE???!!!!, thought Unlucky, I had checked everybody to see if they had any cell phones or weapons…. So why does he has one?

And then it struck him. He hadn’t checked everybody. He had checked most of the boys, but the finishing touches on Fallenbane’s body had taken longer than planned. He had even asked Xetka to do some of the finishing touches.

He had asked Haruhi to check the girls and a couple of guys, including Lyly. Haruhi had given Lyly a combat knife.

True that Unlucky and Haruhi kept arguing on which death was the best, and they had been mad at each other ever since the whole operation had started.

Haruhi’s motives were clear. She wanted Lyly to eliminate Unlucky from the “Game”. If that were to happen, it would ensure slow deaths for everybody else. He couldn’t die here.
Strange how life works.

When Unlucky tried for the first time to and a hit on the blood crazy Lyly, the blood driven Lyly was able to suppress his rage, dodge and lacerate Unlucky’s arm from the wrist to the elbow.

And everything seemed to be going so well.

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Lyly grinned. Unlucky had made two mistakes. The first one was coming unarmed. The second one was his whole plan.

He had acted as a leader, when he is one of the youngest. His incoherencies on the subject of whether they should split were too weird.

The others had seen nothing. And they bought everything.

In time of fright or in a crisis, humans tend to follow the first dude that kinda makes sense. It’s one of the reasons why Hitler had been elected in 1933. Unlucky had used that human flaw perfectly.

Lyly had a golden opportunity of killing the psychopath behind all of this. He was sure that he was the mastermind and that if he died, the killings would stop.

Lyly suddenly felt a sharp pain in his knee, and when he looked down, he saw his knee bending backwards.

He yelled.

A few moments later, his mind was shrouded with black and he lost consciousness.

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Dainoblood had watched the fight from the crack of the door he was hiding behind. He had wet himself while watching the fight.

The last thing he saw before closing the door was a bloody Unlucky picking up a bloody knife.

[Morbidly Re-l]

D: you should make this into a novel..it awesome! n.n
waa stop fueling my fan fiction addiction Dx

[Kuro]

- What you like
I think it's interesting to see the same story from two points of views. As for the style, I see that now you are using short, concise sentences. I don't mind them.

- What you don't like
Uhnm... I don't think I can find anything. It would be interesting to focus a bit on the character's motivations or feelings. For example, there were some people who died without doing anything.

- What you want
To continue this story, but only if you would enjoy doing so.

[takishi]

Chapter 4: The Prince and the Princess

Dismyname and Alterminded, from the beginning, never preoccupied of what was happening around them. The only time they got out of the room was when they had decided to split up and search for anything useful.
And even then, they had to be together.
They were boyfriend and Girlfriend. One game they were hung together. How nice you could say. Except that they had been framed by the wolves. That episode had created a ton of fan fictions”, “DEEMEO AND ALTERIET IN ONE ACT” by Acdbrn was the flame that ignited everything.

A really well written parody of Shakespeare’ “Romeo and Juliette”.

Then came all of the fan art, (Hiddenls’ Version) “Deemeo and Alteriet” by Hiddenl and Re-Ls’ “Deemeo and Alteriet Chibi Version” were both awesome picture of how they saw the people in the game, while depicting their view of what happened.

All of these fan arts’ were really good, and Dismyname and Alterminded were moved by what these people had done for them. When they were proposed to have a real meeting somewhere in Canada, they didn’t hesitate one second. They wanted to honor the persons’ who had done this.

But things unfortunately got messy pretty quickly.

A complete black out.

They had been separated after losing consciousness and that had completely traumatized both of them. They love was like Romeo and Juliette’s. They could just die for each other. The only difference between the two couples is that the first one could love each other without hiding it.

And after finding each other again, they hadn’t left each other ever since. They love was stronger than a mountain and more beautiful than the prettiest thing in the world. But Alterminded was restless. He couldn’t imagine living while his dear Dismyname was killed by the hand of one of these so-called “friends”. She wanted to stay at his side forever, even in death. If she had to die, it would be with her love.

This love royally pissed of Haruhi.

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She wanted her prey to fear the “Wolves”; she wanted them to feel the fact that any second could be their last moments on this cruel world.

But those two didn’t seem troubled by any of this, and it really enraged Haruhi. That idiot Lyly-Chan had already failed to kill Unlucky, and that meant that Haruhi would have to do it. Not that it bothered her. That way he was going to suffer.

But it added work for her. If only Xetka would just come out of hiding, so that she could help.


these are the fanfictions. I hope you will have pleasure reading/ looking at them.

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[takishi]

Ouch, it's been a while since the last chapter. Sorry for the wait! (If anybody waited at all of course.

Chapter 5: The Artist

Haruhi was still weeping. She had accompanied Acdbrn and Kura is their search of the weeping girl. Of course Haruhi knew that Xetka was behind the "weeping" since it was her who was crying. Haruhi decided that it was time to accelerate the movement. Not enough people had died and with unlucky out of the picture, Haruhi and Xetka could kill anybody they'd like in the most horrible way they could think of.

Lyly hadn't been so useless after all.

Acdbrn had been easier to lose than planned. He thought he'd seen something in a corridor, and by the time he had looked up, Kura and Haruhi were already gone.

The door behind which Xetka was weeping slowly opened and a smile opened on her face.

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Unlucky woke up. He was in the safe room, and his arm was bandaged. He saw that only few people were left in the room. TheGoldenFairy, Trinity, Alterminded, Dismyname and Kit.

Five people. Four soon to be dead people.

Trinity saw Unlucky trying to get up and she rushed to him.

"You shouldn't move so much. You'll reopen your wound."
"Where are the others?"
"Crackshot, Hiddenl and Kuro are gone to fetch you some pain killers for your arms, while Haruhi, Kura and Acdbrn are gone, because they heard weeping."

Damn Xetka made her move, he thought. He had to do something otherwise, they were all going to die horrible deaths. He couldn't leave them alive, because that would be opposite to what he had decided in the beginning of this horrible massacre, but at least, he could kill them fast, and without pain

"Unlucky, you shouldn't move like that. Kura said that you should get some rest."
"I'm fine." Little did they know that before coming back, he had given himself a powerful shot of painkillers.

He reached for the knife that laid near him, and slashed at Trinitys' throat, severing an artery, and making blood gush out incontrolably from the wound. A very surprised Tinity fell onto the floor, twitching like a fish out of the water, trying to keep the blood from coming out of her body. May your soul rest in peace, thought Unlucky.

TheGoldenFairy tried to run away, but Unlucky threw the knife at her, hitting her on the side, in between ribs, severing in the process a lung. She will have trouble breathing, and in a few minutes she will be dead. May God have your soul, thought Unlucky.

Kit reached for Unlucky, fists boiling with rage. Unlucky was hit and his head flew to the side. He stood his ground and hardly moved at all. Kit jumped back, and put his guard up. He was a trained fighter and he didn't think that he would have trouble with an injured opponent. Unlucky just stood there, looking at him. After a few minutes of both of them just looking at each other, Kit made his move. He attacked Unlucky with a raging uppercut. Unlucky simply took a step to the side to dodge, before counter-attacking Kit's side. His attacks were deprived from emotions. Kit thought that he was fighting a robot. Kit decided to finish the battle, and charged head first. Unlucky just stood there and took the blow. Kit then bear hugged Unlucky, which wasn't an easy task since he was taller than Kit. Unlucky just looked at him at threw his knee in Kits stomach. The blow was devastating and Kit bent double, trying to catch some air.

Unlucky walked to TheGoldenFairy, who was close to death, and retrieved his knife, from the gaping wound. He walked back to Kit, and before cutting of the head, he said these simple words.

"May God have mercy on your soul".

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The adrenaline slowly wearing off in Unluckys veins put him in a shivering state. He modified Kits corpse to make it look like it was his own, and then fetched a black hoodie. He stopped for a second in front of Dismyname and Alterminded, who were looking at him with frightened expressions. He just looked at them and simply put two small bottles of sleeping pills in front of both of them.

He simply put the hood on and left the horror scene.

It was like an artist's exit.

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This forum has a mind of it's own. I haven't changed Lylys' name in the "Horror of the Game", and yet every Lyly has been changed to Lyly-Chan. This forum scares me.

[takishi]

THIS FORUM HAS DONE IT AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lily-chan WAS CHANGED TO Lily-chan-CHAN

holy bananas!

what if I put in Lyon? HAHA IT WORKS! THIS FORUM HAS BEEN OUTSMARTED

[takishi]

Chapter 6: The Deceiver

Haruhi was happy. Kura was going to take some time to die. With a broken leg, she will never get out of here. A human being can survive a week without drinking water. More if they drink they're own urine, but Kura was way too proud to do so, and without a container, hard to to drink it.

But things weren't all peachy in Haruhi's mind. Unlucky had come back with them, and that meant that she couldn't kill people slowly. At least no until he died. Which shouldn't take too much time. He had already been a real party pooper when he killed Acdbrn fast. She had planed a real spectacle for him. Xetka was also frustrated from not killing Acdbrn slowly, but they were going to go kill the rest of the people, in the "safe" room.

It was going to be a real massacre. Before meeting up with Unlucky, Xetka and Haruhi decided that they should kill him as fast as possible to have fun with some prisonners. A small distraction could kill him. Or Haruhi could kill him before they arrive.... Haruhi cherished the idea for a few seconds, before remembering that there were at least 9 people still alive, if Unlucky had done nothing, but two girls vs potentially 9 people, it wasn't

And with a bit of luck, Kuro, Hiddenl and Crackshot will not have come back yet, and I can have some fun torturing Alterminded and Dismyname, thought Haruhi. I'm gonnna have a ball.

Unlucky stayed behind the two girls.

Maybe he isn't as dumb as I thought. He might have guessed that we want to kill him, thought Xetka.

They arrived at the "safe" room and the two girls were at awe for words. They saw a pool of blood. Guts everywhere and the room reeked of death. They couldn't believe that Unlucky had done this. He who resented killing slowly. Looks like some people died slowly, like TheGoldenFairy for exemple. A severed lung is not only a slow death, it's also a painful one. At this point, Haruhi felt rage against Unlucky for killing everybody, and not leaving some people to kill for them. But she couldn't reveal her feelings just yet. The timing wasn't right yet.

"Nobody died slowly."
"What did you say Unlucky", asked Xetka.
"Nobody died slowly. Kit was beheaded. Trinity had a severed artery, and even though it might seem that TheGoldenFairy suffered, it was only for a few seconds. A knife through her heart finished the job. The guts come drom Fallenbanes' body. As for the couple: Suicide."

The scene was horrible. Who would've of thought that he could do something so disgusting thought Haruhi. But something was off.

"Other people were here. Probably Kuro and co. I had forgotten about them", said Haruhi
"How do we find them here?",asked Xetka. "I know the place well, but I can't find them if I don't have a clue of some sort..."
"I suggest that we foolow the puking sounds...." said Unlucky.

The two girls looked at each other and they heard it. Somebody was puking their guts out close by.

Unlucky might not be as easy to kill as I had first thought, thought Haruhi.

"Don't you try anything funny Haru, I have my eye on you", he said as he passed by Haruhi.

Yблюдок, thought Haruhi.

[takishi]

Chapter 7: The End is near

Unlucky walked with Haruhi and Xetka. Actually, he was walking a few meters behind them. His arm started hurting again, and even though he tried not to show it, the girls knew that he was in pain.

The game would soon come to an end. And he'll be able to kill both girls and the survivors with only his left arm. He wanted to save somebody, but he couldn't let anybody leave this place alive. It was a hard decision but it was the right one.

The last seven people. And soon to be dead people.

Unlucky knew that he would die. You can't kill six people and remain unscathed. His fight against Lyly was the proof. He had almost died during their fight. Once Kuro and the rest of the boys were dead, killing Xetka and Haruhi shouldn't be a problem. The main problem was not dying yet from massive blood loss.

The barfing sound came closer. Finally they arrived at the door where the sounds came from.

Haruhi opened the door and Unlucky simply said this:

"Hello there. Are you ready to die?"

Unlucky rushed in the room wanting to kill the maximum of people before Xetka and Haruhi could have their ways with them. He aimed at Kuro first. Kill the stronger ones first, and finish with the small fries. But it didn't go as planned. Kuro dodged the knife slash, which was supposed to behead him and hit instead Dainoblood who was behind him.

May God receive you in heaven, thought Unlucky.

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This was the best opportunity to kill Unlucky. 2vs1 and he was wounded. He is bound to badly hurt at least one of the two and the odds of him surviving are low, thought Xetka.

While Unlucky dragged behind before, Haruhi and Xetka decided to attack Crackshot, and to leave Unlucky fight the rest of the gang alone.

Xetka could finally fight. She had heard that one of the most painful things you could do to a guy was kick him in the balls. She had never tried it but today she would.

She armed her kick and launched at Crackshot.

[takishi]

Chapter 8: The End is Near.

Damn it.

Why can't things go as planned! we just needed to enter the room, kill the 3 people in there, and voila! Unlucky would have fought, he would have killed 1, maybe 2 people tops, then he was going to be hurt, and then they could have tortured him to no end, making him suffer to his very soul. But NOOOOO. Mister Unlucky had to fail to kill even ONE person, and in the end, he had to pass out. And God is he heavy! He should cut down on the pizzas.

Haruhi was mad. After nearly kicking Crackshot to death, they noticed that Kuro was about to kill Unlucky. She couldn't let him take the life of her soontobeplaything. She had just joined her knuckles together and had hit Kuro the hardest she could in the back of his head. That had done the trick. She had then noticed that Crackshot was coming back to himself, and that Hiddenl was going to move again. It would have been so easy to just kill them right away. But she cheerished the idea of mental/ physical torture that she would put upon them later, so she let them live for the time being.

Xetka had insisted to bring Back Unlucky to the main room, to heal in a very painful way his arm, to better kill him later. and she didn't like to get her hands bloody, so she wanted to let Unlucky do some of the torturing on the "survivors". Loads of fun for everybody. But she now had second thoughts on saving Unlucky, he was really heavy, and he didn't do anything to help them.

He was unconscious. But not for long.

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Unlucky felt water being splashed onto his face. The Feeling of the cold liquid running down his face woke him up. He felt stiff. What had happened. The last thing he remembered was trying to kill Kuro. He remembered being hit very hard on his arm, and then his world had gone black. He tried to move his right arm but it wouldn't move.

Not surprising, he thought, he must have lost his arm for good.

He then tried to move his left arm and this one didn't want to move also.

Now that is wrong.

His eyes opened in a flash. He was starting to wonder what was happening. He saw that his arms were tied with leather belt to the armrests of a chair. His legs were tied in the same fashion to the legs of the chair. He couldn't move and he started to make the chair rock. Maybe if he broke the chair itself, He would be able to get free.

"What are you trying to do?"

The voice came out of the darkness. It made him look up, making him forget about trying to escape. He saw Haruhi's face come out. She had a shot in her hand.

"How does it feel? Being helpless? Have you ever felt this pain? The fear of being helpless? You are tall, strong and heavy. Nobody must've attacked you and you must have never felt the fear caused by another human being. But this is going to change. You will fear me. You will beg me to kill you. And guess what...."

"You will never kill me. Is that it? Did you really have to do the cliché monologue that the evil person says? You even used the same sentence that they all use. "You will beg me to kill you". Guess what bra? I'll never surrender to you."

"I was hoping you'd say that. But what will you do. Your good arm is almost dead, the slightest touch makes you scream your lungs out, and you are tied to a chair. You are in no position to negotiate."

"I didn't come to this gordforsaken hospital to negotiate. I don't believe in God. I'm realist. This world and the human race is corrupt. You are the living proof of it. All of the humans deserve to die."

"Do you think that you are with out sin? You are the one who made this whole plan. 11 people died or are dying, because of your plan!"

"Did I say that I didn't deserve to die? I'm the anti-hero. I have killed. I have sinned. But I've saved eleven people from the cruelty of men. These people were more or less innocent, and they'll go to heaven if it exists. I don't enjoy killing, compared to you."

Suddenly, she took out a baseball bat from out of her back and hit Unluckys' forearm. The form of the bat chewed deep into the pus gushing wound. It reopened and blood started spewing from it. Unluckys' scream was loud and powerful. Tears started rolling on his cheeks.

"It hurts doesn't it. It's true that I enjoy killing, but I prefer by far torturing. You will suffer. But first, let's save that arm. Do you see this shot that I have in my hand? It's a mix made of Morphine and Adrenaline. It's pretty powerful and you will feel no pain in your arm. Whatever happens to it. You will get it don't worry. But first we have to do something about this wound. It's putting blood everywhere."

Xetka came. Carrying a blowtorch. Unlucky could guess what was going to happen then. The blowtorch came to Unluckys' arm and the smell of burnt flesh came up instantly. Xetka had placed the blowtorch on the wound, to cauterize it. The result was that the wound "healed" a bit, and the scream coming out of Unlucky was deafning.

"Mmh... Exctasy" said Haruhi.

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Unlucky was almost dead. But his arm was back in action. Haruhi hadn't lied, the didn't feel the pain in it anymore. He couldn't feel the pain anywhere. Unlucky started rocking the chair like he did before. He fell backwards with the chair. Physics made it's magic, and the chair broke under the weight of Unlucky.

He was now free. He went to a secret compartement where he had hidden and axe.

"It's time to end this bloody masquerade", he said to himself.

[hiddenl]

Will be looking forward

to the next chapter.

[takishi]

Well, even the best things have to end one day.

Chapter 9: Game Over

Unlucky was tired. Every step he took was an trial for him. Each could be his last. Over the last few days, his arm had been deeply cut, it had gotten infected, it didn't get treated, it had been pounded on so hard that it made him pass out, and finally, it had been burned. But he could move it more or less normally. Even if he didn't feel the pain that slept in it, is movements were not as fluid as they had once been. The fluidity he had when he fought with Lyly was long gone.

The axe hung loosely in his hand. It was with this weapon that he had killed Fallenbane with. It was the weapon that killed the first person. It was only fitting that it was used to end this crazy story. Haruhi and Xetka were the only ones left to kill. He had called them to rid of two evil persons. His survival was slim but if he couldn't sacrifice himself to kill two evils, then it was worth it.

He smiled at that last thought. He was doing like in Akumetsu. Except Akumetsu never involved innocent civilians in it. And also Unlucky didn't have a cloning plant. But except for those small details, it was exactly the same.

I need to cut down on the mangas, he thought.

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Haruhi was thinking. She was trying to predict the survivors next move. Were they going to stay put or were they going to move to try to kill their two frail opponents. If they did that last thing then it would be their doom. The doors were rigged to close automatically if they were to be closed. For this reason, all of the doors were opened. If a door was to be closed, the person inside was going do die from starvation. Slow death.

Perfect.

"Was it really a wise decision to leave Unlucky alone? He had been a thorn in the plan.", inquired Xetka.

"Where he is, he won't bother us. He must have some nice feverish dreams. The drugs I administered him are really powerful, so we won't see him for a while."

"Still. He has shown tremendous willpower up till now. Until you almost broke his arm and burned it up real bad, he was really mentally strong."

"Was. What we administered was a crushing defeat. His mind must in ruins right now."

"Still seems too easy..."

"Have I ever been wrong?" asked Haruhi. "He won't bother us."

Xetka wanted to say that Haruhi had often been wrong up till now. Like when she saif that Unlucky wasn't gonna betray them, or when she said that he was going to help them kill Kuro and co. But something kept her from saying it. Call it female intution or self preservation, but she felt that if she had said those things, she would've died.

"Let me tell you where you are wrong."

Xetka turned and saw a ghost. It was the last thing she saw before and axe planted itself in the middle of her forehead.

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Haruhi turned fast enough to see Xetka fall to the ground, the axe sticking out of her head. Instant death. The one who had thrown the axe was Unlucky. He was standing in the open doorway. His right arm was extended, proving that he had thrown the axe to Xetka.

"How did you get out of your bonds? It your state you should'nt have been able to?" asked Haruhi.

"Being heavy has it's advantages. The chair gave way pretty easily, when I fell to the ground."

He started walking towards Haruhi. Every step was difficult, and he was having a hard time walking. Haruhi took advantage of his slow pace, and she tried to My Love the axe out of Xetka's head. But the axe had bitten deep within Xetka's head., and Haruhi didn't have the strengh to pull it out.

Too bad for that idea, she thought. Time to resort to plan B.

She ran to him, holding an army knife in her hand. She stabbed him in the stomach, using advantage of her speed to kill him early.

But it didn't have the effect wanted. instead of screaming like she thought he would do, instead he grabbed the small girl by the throat.

"You seriously think that this type of wound is going to hurt me now? After all I've been through? You are wrong again. Your shot made me insensitive to pain. I'm the closest thing to a zombie there is. Without all of the decay thing of course. And guess what ya made me this way."

Haruhi couldn't break free from the giants grasp. She was sure that the knife had hit the stomach. Why wasn't he dead yet? she thought.

"Ya don't know much it seems about the human body. A cut to the stomach won't kill a man directly. Although I'm a dead man walking now. But I've been one for a while now. The acid contained in your stomach is one of the powerful there is. It'll take about 20 minutes for my entrailes to melt because of the acid. I'm gonna die. I've been sure of that before you stabbed me. I'm a dead man walking"

She could feel his hand closing around her windpipe. His reach was too great and she couldn't do anything to him anymore. He lifted her from the ground with his arm. Her feet wiggled through the air while she tried faintly to fight for air. Her eyes started rolling back into her head. He grabbed the knife that was still in his tomach and he threw it to the floor. Before she choked to death, he bended his arm and slammed her against a wall.


She fell to the floor, and tried to grasp air. The force with which he had slammed her against the wall had been tremendous, and her back hurted like hell.

Unlucky walked to Xetkas corpse. He grasped the shaft of the axe and jerked it out of Xetka's lifeless head. Walking back to Haruhi, he flipped her on her back. She looked at him and said in a faint voice:

"God..... Help me....."

"There is only one god. Death and when you see him, you should say it's not my time. Your time and mine have come. See ya later."

The axe fell, and with it's fall, the death of Haruhi came. Clean kill.

He walked to the sofa and landed heacily on it. Waiting for the acid to work it's way through his intestines.

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Crackshot tried to open the door, but it was locked. A click could be heard, proving that the door locked itself. Another click was heard. Hiddenl and Crackshot look in it's direction.

A door opened and a ray of light come from it.

The exit.






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