a wolf snuck into a group of friendly rabbits. as the others fell asleep, the wolf appeared in natural form. day by day, one by one, the wolf killed and ate the rabbits. the rabbits, not knowing which the wolf was, arranged a meeting. then— the tribunal decided on the one amongst them that they believed to be the wolf and killed it. if they chose correctly, the rabbits win. if they were wrong... all of the rabbits would be killed and eaten by the wolf. this is the story of such a game.
After over two months I finally updated my fan fiction! Woo! Sorry it took so long Okay please ignore the fact the first paragraph is centre aligned, I've played enough with the BBCode and it still wouldn't move! Ah! So it was just a pain :')
I hope you enjoy it, I am trying to put more character input from each character, and it's a horrible thing to say, but I can't wait to decide if I kill off a few more people :L Having a large group like mine is quite a pain :L
Wolf Games: Game 130 [WON], Game 132 [WON], Game 135 [LOST], Game 139 [WON], Game 140 [WON], Game 192 [WON], Game 193 [WON]
Yeah Just a thing that I wanna tell you. You might not like, but I really like to do this way: Tell more about the character. How are they felling, ect... Make them anxious etc... Dun just like put the begining and the end of it. The middle how they are solving, the felling of each sec. I know that the story has to be short. However, putting this things will make the story more interesting and will put a little of drama to it too. I really love this and I really want to continue reading. I hope my character doesn't die ...
Venelop3 VICTIM Player First Mate; Curator of Virgins
Been a long time Ven. I just re:read the story from the first chapter and i still think it's awesome (not because you turned me into a main character of course, and i don't mind to be a main character anyway).
Ah and i like that you mentioned the "Usagi" song. they usually sing it during Otsukimi (Moon Viewing) festival in Japan, nice
I love the plot, specially chapter 6 (near the end of chapter). Now we need chapter 7