a wolf snuck into a group of friendly rabbits. as the others fell asleep, the wolf appeared in natural form. day by day, one by one, the wolf killed and ate the rabbits. the rabbits, not knowing which the wolf was, arranged a meeting. then— the tribunal decided on the one amongst them that they believed to be the wolf and killed it. if they chose correctly, the rabbits win. if they were wrong... all of the rabbits would be killed and eaten by the wolf. this is the story of such a game.
Post by The Cranky Violin on Jun 17, 2015 19:01:35 GMT -5
Wooow this is getting very enjoyable! This chapter sucked me in completely! The first one was good too but this time I just wanted more as it ended. I saw a few typos again (maybe one xD) but if you have someone reading the chapters beforehand, they could correct those, nya?
I hope you enjoy writing this as much as I enjoy reading it!
Sorry for being late with this installation. I had all but the last two paragraphs completed on the nineteenth, but then I went on a trip for the whole week and didn't arrive back until Saturday. Anyways, Chapter 3 of R:DG is up!
Sooo... Chapter 4 is sort of up as you can see. Proboards decided it wanted to make my life difficult by randomly messing up my coding; hence all the "weird" stuff in there. If worse comes to worse, then I will try to complete it on Monday.
If anyone has the time, and has a somewhat small background with html coding at the least (technically, not necessary) then can you please help me fix these errors. I would usually do it myself, but I am on a kindle, which makes typing thrice more challenging. I cannot access a proper computer until Moday, and it is quite troublesome to read in the current format, which is why I am requesting aid here. All one needs to do is change all "<" to "[" and all ">" to "]". Just copy the text onto a word document and have it so all < or > signs will be replaced with brackets. Again, this is only if it will not provide too much of a burden on your tasks or time, but if someone does do it, then please copy and paste the text (no word attachments since I am on kindle) through this forum's PM.
Thank you. Amie, I only saw your application edit afterwrds, but I made an attempt to incorporate your "personality" and combined with what I originally put, this was what I got. ... Amie = Mikorin, was the sort of vibe I got when typing this installation.
Well, I finally fixed that fanfiction, and in the end, this has taught me one valuable lesson... don't use a kindle for proboards. From now on, I guess I will be sticking with a laptop.
Anyways, this post here is also to thank those who have sent fixed versions of that whole catastrophe. When I was copying and pasting this in word, I got a total of 1898 changes made from the brackets only, and then I had to add in spoilers afterwards. I know it's repetitive, but I'll throw it out there anyways... you have my gratitude!
I don't really like double-posting, but this is for a good reason... just... promise me on this one. This is basically a notification for Chapter 5 having been completed and added on. This installation is rather short since I thought that would have been a good place to end considering that the next chapter will be a change of scenery. Also, as you may have guessed, that was Yuki as "Alice," but she won't be formally introduced until a couple chapters onward.